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1. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 12 and 13?

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, he felt the raised letters were hard to read, though.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, but he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, and he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

• Louis was excited to have a way to read books, then he felt the raised letters were hard to read.

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2. Raymond wants to add a conclusion to his report. Which of the following could BEST follow sentence 24 and close this report?

• Now, there are even Braille watches!

• Now, many libraries have Braille books

• Today, nearly every country in the world used Braille.

• Some blind people listen to audio recordings instead of reading Braille.

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3. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• change father's to fathers

• change slipped to sliped

• change hisself to himself

• Make no change

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4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• change wanted to wanting

• change an to a

• change easier to more easy

• make no change

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5. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• change used to using

• change share to shair

• change informasion to information

• make no change

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1. Emma needs to add a transition word or phrase to help the readers move from the first paragraph (sentences 1-4) to the second paragraph (sentences 5-10). Which transition could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 5?

• Then,

• Next,

• Earlier on,

• In the beginning,

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2. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 14 and 15?

• Beezus loves her aunt, she wants to be just like her.

• Beezus lover her aunt, so she wants to be just like her.

• Beezus loves her aunt and wants to be just like her.

• Beezus loves and she wants to be just like her aunt.

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3. Emma wants to add a conclusion to her report. Which of the following could BEST follow sentence 21 and close this report?

• However, I enjoy reading mystery novels the most.

• Beezus and Ramona are interesting characters.

• After that, maybe you can even be friends!

• I usually get along with my little sister.

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4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• change tries to trys

• insert a comma after sister

• change easy to more easy

• make no change

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5. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• change Ramona's to Ramonas

• change mischeif to mischief

• change there to their

• make no change