Enhancing Writing: Eliminating Wordiness and Redundancy

What does wordiness in writing refer to?

• Applying complex sentence structures effectively

• Using specific terms that enhance clarity

• Incorporating necessary technical jargon

• Employing unnecessary words with little meaning

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CCSS.L.6.6

CCSS.L.7.6

CCSS.W.6.2D

CCSS.W.7.2D

CCSS.W.8.2D

What is redundancy in the context of writing?

• Repeating words or ideas unnecessarily

• The use of synonyms to clarify meaning

• Structuring sentences for emphasis

• Including relevant examples for support

How can writers improve their writing according to the video?

• Through using longer, more complex sentences

• By repeating key points for emphasis

• Through removing unnecessary words

• By adding more descriptive language

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CCSS.RI.7.7

CCSS.RI.8.7

CCSS.RL.6.7

CCSS.RL.7.7

CCSS.RL.8.7

Why is it important to eliminate wordiness in writing?

• To confuse the reader

• To extend the length of the text

• To make the writing more precise and concise

• To showcase an extensive vocabulary

What technique is suggested for revising redundant writing?

• Repeating the main argument

• Combining sentences for clarity

• Introducing new topics

• Adding more examples

In the argumentative letter example, what word was identified as redundant?

• Uniforms

• Letter

• Policy

• School

How can repetition in writing be addressed?

• By using synonyms

• By adding more details

• By removing repeated words or ideas

• By changing the topic

What is a key benefit of making writing more concise?

• It increases the document's length

• It helps in conveying the message more clearly

• It requires less time to write

• It makes the writing more difficult to understand

What should writers do with unnecessary words in their writing?

• Keep them to increase word count

• Highlight them for emphasis

• Replace them with more complex words

• Remove or replace them to enhance clarity

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CCSS.L.1.5A

CCSS.L.1.5B

CCSS.L.K.5A

Why is it important for students to practice eliminating redundancy and wordiness?

• To use more technical language

• To improve the precision and impact of their writing

• To make their writing less understandable

• To meet word count requirements

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CCSS.RL.2.4

CCSS.RL.7.4