Eng Q3 Coherence

Transform the sentences to make them coherent.

The world pondered Gates and assumes he must be a great thinker

Clue: Make the tense of the verbs consistent.

In his book, “ The World Ahead,” he wrote his dream of a technology world where a movie can be watched by a person with the latter’s voice and face replacing those of the actors.

Clue: Make the voice of the verbs consistent.

Gates co-founded the Microsoft in 1975 with Paul Allen, a lover of pets and a computer language developer.

Clue: Avoid dangling modifier.

As a teener, Bill Gates was fond of playing computers and to dismantle them to see how they work.

Clue: Ideas parallel in meaning should be given parallel construction.

Giving an oral presentation can require more preparation than to write a term paper.

Clue: Ideas parallel in meaning should be given parallel construction.

Marites deposited her money in the bank which she earned through hard work.

Clue: Place the clause modifier near the word it modifies.

Everyone in my English Language Proficiency class does their homework.

Clue: Make the antecedent of the pronoun clear.

Crying on the examination table, the doctor gave the small child his vaccine.

Clue: Place the phrase modifier near the word it modifies.

Lydia fed the pigs wearing her raincoat.

Clue: Place the phrase modifier near the word it modifies.

On her way home, Jan found a gold man's watch.

Clue: Place the word modifier near the word it modifies.