Writing Selection 3 "Are There Angels Among Us?" Editing Passage

What is the correct way to write sentence 5?

• While it is Byron who pulls Kenny out of the whirlpool. It is an angel with Joey's face who helps save him.

• While it is Byron who pulls Kenny out of the whirlpool, it is an angel with Joey's face who helps save him.

• While it is Byron who pulls Kenny out of the whirlpool; it is an angel with Joey's face who helps save him.

• This sentence is written correctly in the paper.

How should sentence 7 be changed?

• Delete the comma after family

• Insert a comma after Kenny

• Change left to leaves

• Sentence 7 should not be changed.

What change needs to be made in sentence 9?

• Change Grandma's to grandma's

• Change earth to Earth

• Change exploding to explode

• No change needs to be made.

What change needs to be made in sentence 11?

• Change personally to personaly

• Change beleive to believe

• Insert a comma after angels

• Change them to themselves

What is the correct way to write sentences 23 and 24?

• She was frightened by the way the young men were staring at her, she had no idea what to do.

• She was frightened by the way the young men, they were staring at her and she had no idea what to do.

• She was frightened by the way the young men were staring at her, and she had no idea what to do.

• The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 32?

• Delete the comma after refused

• Change well to good

• Change walking to walked

• No change needs to be made.

How should sentence 35 be changed?

• Change who to whom

• Change College to college

• Change Thanksgiving to thanksgiving

• No change should be made.

What change needed to be made in sentence 38?

• Delete the comma after short cut

• Change would of to would have

• Change included to including

• Change isolated to isollated

What change should be made in sentence 41?

• Change hesitated to hesitates

• Change shaken to shooken

• Change past to passed

• No change should be made in sentence 41.