RW lesson 18 DOL

What is the best way to combine sentence 1 and 2?

• One sunny afternoon, Joanna was riding her bicycle; however, she encountered a new face in the neighborhood.

• One sunny afternoon, Joanna was riding her bicycle and she encountered a new face in the neighborhood.

• One sunny afternoon, Joanna was riding her bicycle so she encountered a new face in the neighborhood.

• One sunny afternoon, Joanna was riding her bicycle, yet she encountered a new face in the neighborhood.

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Darla needs to add a topic sentence for paragraph 2.

Which sentence should be added just before sentence 6 as the topic sentence for this paragraph?

• An innocent encounter triggered more episodes. 

• As the summer sun beat down on the quiet road, they were excited.

• The rays of the sun painted the quiet road with warmth.

• It was a new day filled with unanswered questions.

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 What change can Darla make to improve the clarity of sentence 8?

• Change It was to It will be

• Change with to because

• Change it to the event

• No revision is needed in this sentence.

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What transition is best to add to the beginning of sentence 17?

• In the end

• Therefore

• Soon

• After all

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Darla needs a concluding sentence for the last paragraph (sentence 18). 

Write one or two sentences that will effectively close the story.

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