Sentence Pattern #1

Edits are when a sentence is changed in an effort to fix mistakes.

• True

• False

Original Sentence: You walk the land you've always known. The river, the ocean, and the deep forest belong to you.

Edited Sentence: You walk the land you've always known. The river. The ocean. The deep forest belong to you.

What changed?

• The commas have been replaced with periods.

• The commas have been replaced with exclamation points.

• The apostrophe has been removed from the sentence.

• No changes have been made.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

Original Sentence: You walk the land you've always known. The river, the ocean, and the deep forest belong to you.

Edited Sentence: We walk the land you've always known. The river, the ocean, the deep forest belong to us.

What changed?

• The subject was corrected.

• The singular subject has been changed into a plural subject.

• The capitalization was corrected on the edited sentence.

• No changes have been made.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Original Sentence: You walk the land you've always known. The river, the ocean, and the deep forest belong to you.

Edited Sentence: You walk the land you've always known. The river the ocean, the deep forest belong to you.

What changed?

• The apostrophe was deleted from the edited sentence.

• The subject has been changed.

• The comma was deleted, causing a run-on sentence.

• No changes have been made.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

A run-on sentence is when a sentence has too much information in it and it is not punctuated properly.

• True

• False

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

Sentences can NEVER have more than one subject!!

• True

• False

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1C

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I