Writing SCR: Parallel Constructions

Sentence 1 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 1 in a clear and effective way.

(1) Riding, performing tricks, and to feel free are the benefits that come from skateboarding originating in the United States in the late 1940's.

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CCSS.RI.11-12.3

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Sentence 2 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 2 in a clear and effective way.

(2) Glide on snow, spraying powder as you turn, and carving the mountainside are the joys from the winter sport of snowboarding.

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CCSS.RI.11-12.3

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Sentence 3 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 3 in a clear and effective way.

(3) The Moche culture created, fished in, and surfs back on kayak-like water craft that three thousand years ago were the first types of surf board.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Sentence 4 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 4 in a clear and effective way.

(4) To have incredible balance, being able to spin on one foot, and completing jumps and spins in the air are all skills learned by the best ice skaters.

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CCSS.RI.11-12.3

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

Sentence 5 needs to be revised. In the box provided, rewrite sentence 5 in a clear and effective way.

(5) Grab the tail of the board, completing a back flip, or rotating 360 degrees in the air are tricks completed in competitions by snowboarders.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C