Editing Review

What change is needed? "I did not think a road trip to an outdoor museum would be fun I was wrong."

• I did not think a road trip to an outdoor museum would be fun, but I was wrong.

• I did not think a road trip to an outdoor museum would be fun or I was wrong.

• I did not think a road trip to an outdoor museum would be fun, since I was wrong.

• I did not think a road trip to an outdoor museum would be fun because I was wrong.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Instead of landing in Virginia as planned the Mayflower ended up in massachusetts near Cape Cod. What change is needed?

• Change Virginia to virginia

• Change Mayflower to mayflower

• Change massachusetts to Massachusetts

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Soon. He started publishing a weekly newspaper called The Pennsylvania Gazette.

What change is needed?

• Change Pennsylvania to pennsylvania

• Replace the period after soon with a comma and change He to he

• Make no change

• Change He to he

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

However, the Pilgrims wanted to live in a community with any type of fair and safe structure.

What change is needed?

• Change Pilgrims to pilgrims

• Delete the comma after However

• Change wanted to wants

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Franklin wrote it when, he was an old man finishing it when he was 82.

What change is needed?

• Move the comma after when to after man

• Move the comma after when to after Franklin

• Delete the comma

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Later, he began a second newspaper, in german, to serve Pennsylvania’s many German settlers.

What change is needed?

• Delete the comma after Later.

• change 'german' to German

• Change 'German' to german

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

My aunt opened the jewelry box and screamed, “Your grandma’s beautiful diamond necklace is missing!

What change is needed?

• Change grandma’s to grandmas’

• Insert a comma after box

• Insert quotation marks after missing!

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

On november 11, 1620, the colonists signed this important document.

What change is needed?

• Change november to November

• Delete the comma after 1620

• Change colonists to Colonists

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.2A

The teacher scanned the room and said “If you’re caught talking, you will have two days of lunch detention next week.”

What change is needed?

• Add a comma after said

• Change you’re to your

• Change days to day’s

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

It would eventually become known as the Mayflower compact.

What change is needed?

• Change become to became

• Make no change

• Change Mayflower to mayflower

• Change compact to Compact

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A