2018 Editing Passage 2 - Visit Austin

16 How should sentence 1 be changed? 

• F Change familys to families 

• G Change off to of 

• H Change to travel to they travel 

• J Sentence 1 should not be changed. 

17 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3? 

• A Change look to looking 

• B Delete more 

• C Change closer to closser 

• D No change should be made in this sentence. 

18 What is the correct way to write sentence 6? 

• F This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. And looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite. 

• G This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country and looks pink that is because it is made from sunset-red granite. 

• H This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country, and it looks pink. Because it is made from sunset-red granite. 

• J This massive building is the largest capitol building in the country. It looks pink because it is made from sunset-red granite. 

19 What change needs to be made in sentence 9? 

• A Change It to And 

• B Change your to you’re 

• C Delete the comma 

• D Change produces to produses 

20 What is the correct way to write sentence 11? 

• F This museum tells the story of Texas. Through three floors of exhibits. 

• G A museum that tells the story of Texas. Through three floors of exhibits. 

• H This museum tells the story of Texas through three floors of exhibits. 

• J The sentence is written correctly in the paper. 

21  What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12? 

• A Change and listen to you will listen 

• B Change to eyewitness accounts to too eyewitness accounts 

• C Change battels to battles 

• D No change should be made in sentence 12. 

22 How should sentence 14 be changed? 

• F Change no trip to know trip 

• G Change complete to completely 

• H Change without a visit to without no visit 

• J Change Texas spirit theater to Texas Spirit Theater 

23 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 20? 

• A Change then to than 

• B Change will come to have come 

• C Insert a comma after bridge 

• D No change needs to be made in this sentence. 

24 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 25? 

• F Change it’s to its 

• G Delete the comma after lakes 

• H Change swimming to swiming 

• J No change should be made in sentence 25.