Important Job

The central idea of Stuart's paper is weak. Which of the following could replace sentence 4 and provide a better central idea for this paper?

• Baggage handlers have an important job with a lot of responsibility, but they also get to do some interesting things.

• For this paper, I am going to explain some really awesome facts about this terrific job of baggage handler.

• There are many jobs to learn about, but wouldn't you like to know what I think about this interesting job?

• So, sit back, get comfortable, and get ready to learn all about the interesting job of baggage handler.

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• They help passengers get their bags easily, and they also help mail carriers get their letters and packages.

• Helping and getting their bags, letters, and packages easily, passengers and mail carriers get them.

• They help passengers get their bags early because they also help mail carriers get their letters and packages.

• Although they help passengers get their bags easily, they also help mail carriers get their letters and packages.

Stuart would like to add the following sentence to the fourth paragraph (sentences 19 - 23).

Finally, and most importantly, they get to help people every day.

Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?

• After sentence 19

• After sentence 20

• After sentence 22

• After sentence 23

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 24?

• Either being a baggage handler is a tough job, or it is an important job.

• Being a baggage handler is tough, a job, and important.

• Being a baggage handler is a tough but important job.

• When being a baggage handler is a tough job, it is important.

Which sentence does NOT belong in this paper?

• Sentence 5

• Sentence 6

• Sentence 15

• Sentence 16