Trip to the zoo

What change should be made to sentence 1?

• Change zoo to Zoo

• Add a comma after to

• Add a comma after Friday

• No change needed 

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made to sentence 2?

• Change didn’t to wont

• Change brother to Brother

• Change didn’t to went

• No change needed

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CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3

What is the best sentence to add after sentence 5?

• I went to the zoo one time with my best friend, and her parents got us ice cream.

• Zoos started out in the 1800s, and they are still around today!

• Dad has been very grumpy lately, and yelled at my brother yesterday for kicking the soccer ball against the wall. 

• Mom said that I have to behave well in order to go to the zoo.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

How could I best combine sentences 11 and 12?

• My dad likes the snakes he’ll want to go to the snake house and see the cobra. 

• My dad likes the snakes he’ll want to go to the snake, house and see the cobra.

• My dad likes the snakes, so he’ll want to go to the snake house and see the cobra. 

• My dad likes the snakes  so he’ll want to go to the snake house, and see the cobra.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

What change should be made to sentence 12?

• Change cobra to Cobra

• Delete the word and

• Change snake house to snakehouse

• No change needed

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made to sentence 14?

• Changed wanted to want

• Changed wanted to will want

• Delete the comma

• No change needed

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made to sentence 18?

• Change the period to a question mark

• Change hot dog to HotDog

• Change rhino to rino 

• No change needed

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5