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Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• Dallas Texas.
• Dallas- Texas.
• Dallas, Texas. 
• Correct as is

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CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• enjoys to work
• enjoys working
• enjoyed working
• enjoy worked

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CCSS.L.8.1A

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• he worried
• he was worried
• he was worrying
• all of the above are correct

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CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4) adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• adds in
• ads in
• adds on
• ads on

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• job, but
• job, so
• job, and
• job, for

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• smaller company.
• more small company.
• smallest company. 
• correct as is. 

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CCSS.L.3.1G

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• as costly as
• as great as
• as inefficiently as 
• as incredibly asa

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CCSS.L.3.1G

Renaldo had a job at a large corporation in 1)Dallas Texas. He 2)enjoys work there, but he thought it could be run more efficiently. He pondered quitting his job,  but 3)he had worries that he might not be able to find another one easily. One day he was reading the classified 4)adds in the newspaper, and he saw his dream job. He applied for the 5)job, although he was hired. He moved to the job which was in a 6)company more small. He almost immediately regretted his decision to change jobs. Although the company was smaller, it was run just 7)as slowly as his previous company. He called his former boss and asked for his old job back. Now he is back in his old office at his old company,and he realizes that every job has 8)it’s advantages and disadvantages.

• its 
• its'
• it is
• correct as is

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CCSS.L.3.1A