Revise & Edit

What change should be made in the following sentence?
"What do I do first," I asked eagerly.

• change comma to a quotation mark
• delete the quotation marks after the comma
• change eagerly to eager
• make no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
" Make sure you don't leave any lumps," Dad instructed while I stired the mixture.

•  change comma after lumps to a period
• change instructed to instructing
• change stired to stirred
• no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
It didn't seem like such a small amount would be enough to make a pancake but I soon realized just how much the batter spreads out.

• change didn't to did'nt
• insert a comma after pancake
• change spreads out to spread out
• no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
While I scraped my impatience off the griddle, Dad showed me what he meant by “solid bubbles” and then taught me how to flip the pancakes correct.

• Change scraped to scrapped 
• Insert a comma after bubbles
• change taught to teached
• change correct to correctly

What change should be made in the following sentence?
I learned that cooking takes more patience and attention to detail then I had ever dreamed.

• change that to this
• change takes to take
• insert comma after patience
• change then to than

What change should be made in the following sentence?
I look forward to the recess bell like everyone else, but every time I go Outside, I think about how recess could be even better. 

• delete but
• change Outside to outside
• change better to more better
• no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Some of my friends play soccer or football on the field, but these unorganized games usually consist of one or two kids hogging the ball and everyone else just running around chassing them.

• change play to plays
• delete comma after field
• change chassing to chasing
• no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Other boy’s and girl’s are so eager for a challenge that they end up breaking rules by climbing on restricted parts of the jungle gyms, such as the roofs and slide covers. 

• change boy’s and girl’s to boys and girls
• change by climbing on to they climb on
• change by climbing on to they climb on
• change are so eager to is so eager

What change should be made in the following sentence?
Some people might argue that a rock-climbing wall is dangerous and  it  required too much adult supervision. 

• insert a comma after dangerous
• delete and that
• change to much to too much
• make no change

What change should be made in the following sentence?
With proper instruction and supervision, the fourth and fifth graders at our school would really benefit from the addition of a rock-climbing wall to our playground. 

• change proper to propper
• change graders to grader's
• change from to it would be from
• no change