Editing-Week 18

Which of the following is written correctly?

• At precisely twelve oclock the huge church bells rang out from the tower and the giant heavy doors swung open.

• At precisely twelve o'clock, the huge church bells rang out from the tower, and the giant, heavy doors swung open.

• At precisely twelve o'clock the huge church bells rang out from the tower and the giant heavy doors swing open

• At precisely twelve oclock the huge church bells ring out from the tower and the giant heavy doors swinging open.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Quick as a flash my cousins, and me burst out into the bright, hot afternoon.

• Quick as a flash my cousins and i burst out into the bright hot afternoon.

• Quick as a flash, my cousins and I burst out into the bright, hot afternoon.

• Quick as a flash, my cousins and me burst out into the bright hot afternoon.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Grandma, and grandpas farmhouse was our destination, and eating lunch was our first mission

• Grandma and Grandpa's farmhouse were our destination and eating lunch was our first mission.

• Grandma and grandpas farmhouse was our destination and eating lunch was our first mission.

• Grandma and Grandpa's farmhouse was our destination, and eating lunch was our first mission.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Once we were completely stuffed, we slammed our way out Grandma's back door.

• Once we was completely stuffed, we slam are way out grandma's back door.

• Once we was completely stuff we slamming are way out Grandmas back door.

• Once we were completely stuffed we slammed our way out grandmas back door.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1D

Which of the following is written correctly?

• we chased barn cats stomped in cow pies and threw each other into haystacks.

• We chase barn cats, stomped in cow pies, and through each other into haystacks.

• We chasing barn cats, stomped in cow pies, and throwing each other into haystacks.

• We chased barn cats, stomped in cow pies, and threw each other into haystacks.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

Which of the following is written correctly?

• We tossed one another into wheelbarrows and raced across the earthen, hay-covered barn floor.

• we tossed one another into wheelbarrows and raced across the earthen hay-covered barn floor.

• We toss one another into wheelbarrows, and race across the earthen, hay-covered barn floor

• We tossing one another into wheelbarrows, and racing across the earthen hay-covered barn floor.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Another favorite place too play was the basement, no matter how many times we'd been down there, it always seemed like their was more to discover.

• Another favorite place to play was the basement. No matter how many times we'd been down there, it always seemed like there was more to discover.

• Another favorite place to play was the basement no matter how many times we’d been down there it always seemed like there was more to discover.

• Another favorite place to play were the basement, no matter how many times we'd been down their, it always seem like there was more to discover.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Their were flowers from Grandma's garden, drying in the cramped, quarters behind the enormous, massive furnace.

• There was flowers from grandmas garden. Drying in the cramped quarters behind the enormous massive, furnace.

• There were flowers from Grandma's garden drying in the cramped quarters behind the enormous, massive furnace.

• There were flowers from grandmas garden. drying in the cramped quarters behind the enormous massive furnace

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which of the following is written correctly?

• As soon as night fell, we'd leave the dark, drafty basement for the yard.

• As soon as nite fall, we'd leave the dark drafty basement for the yard.

• As soon as night fell we’d leave the dark drafty basement for the yard.

• As soon as night fallen we'd leave the dark, drafty basement fore the yard.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Which of the following is written correctly?

• Catching fireflies was a favorite, outdoor activity. Chasing each other threw the yard playing nighttime tag were also popular.

• Catching fireflies was a favorite outdoor activity chasing each other through the yard playing nighttime tag was also popular.

• Catching fireflies were a favorite outdoor activity, chascin each other threw the yard playing nighttime tag was also popular.

• Catching fireflies was a favorite outdoor activity. Chasing each other through the yard playing nighttime tag was also popular.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F