Revising EOC Advisory

The word mixing is not the most effective word to use in sentence 6. Which word best replaces mixing in the sentence?

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CCSS.L.9-10.3

CCSS.L.9-10.4

CCSS.L.9-10.5

CCSS.RL.9-10.4

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

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CCSS.L.9-10.1B

CCSS.W.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.2C

CCSS.W.9-10.4

Larry wants to add this sentence to the third paragraph (sentences 11-20)

Meat, fruits, and vegetables could now be safely stored for weeks or months.

where should he insert this sentence?

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CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 26?

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

April wants to add a supporting sentence to the third paragraph (sentences 11-18). Which sentence should be added after sentence 13?

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CCSS.RI.9-10.1

CCSS.RI.9-10.2

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.W.9-10.2B

The pronoun in sentence 18 is unclear. Which word should replace they to create a more effective sentence?

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

Which sentence is extraneous and should be deleted from the fourth paragraph (sentences 19-24)?

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CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

April does not think a way is the best phrase to use in sentence 28. Which phrase is the best replacement for a way in the sentence?

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CCSS.L.9-10.4

CCSS.L.9-10.5

CCSS.RL.9-10.4

April would like to add the following detail to the sixth paragraph (sentence30-34)... Where should this sentence be placed?

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CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

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