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These days, many parents give their children a mobile phone.

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In my opinion, this is a good thing but some parents disagree

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in this essay, i will look at both sides and give reasons for my opinion.

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i have three main reasons for my opinion.

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Firstly, mobile phones can keep children safe.

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For example parents can contact their kids easily and know where they are.

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Next, mobile phones can help children to study

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For instance, they can use their phone to find information or play educational games.

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in addition, children can use their phones to communicate with friends.

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This means children can have fun and don’t feel lonely

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