1st 9 Weeks Revision and Editing Review

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change week to weak

• Insert a comma after school

• Change could not to cannot

• Change for to on

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RI.7.10

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change Town to town

• Change Pat's to Pats

• Change hour to our

• Change were to are

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Change were to will be

• Change their to there

• Change day to days

• Change in to before

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

The word move is not the best word to use in sentence 7.  Which word should replace move in this sentence?

• wriggle

• tickle

• step

• walk

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

Darla left out the following sentence from the fifth paragraph (sentences 15-16). 

• After sentence 14

• After sentence 15

• After sentence 16

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 17 and 18?

• We spread out our blankets, towels, umbrellas, and all the other things that people take to the beach.

• We spread out our blankets and towels and then we spread out our umbrellas and everything else.

• We spread out our blankets and towels, and then we spread out our umbrellas and all the other things people take to the beach.

• We spread out our blankets and towels, so we can take all the other things to the beach.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Delete the comma after yard

• Change climb to climbs

• Change Because to When

• Change stand to standed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write sentence 9?

• We look up through the gold canopy of majestic old trees so I wistfully recall

                  the carefree hours I spent daydreaming high in their branches.

   

• We look up through the gold canopy of majestic old trees, and I wistfully recall      the carefree hours I spent daydreaming high in their branches.

• We look up through the gold canopy of majestic old trees I wistfully recall the

                   carefree hours I spent daydreaming high in their branches.

   

• We look up through the gold canopy of majestic old trees because I wistfully

                  recall the carefree hours I spent daydreaming high in their branches.

   

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 10?

• Change sold to soled

• Delete the comma after whisper

• Change here to hear

• Change belong to belongs

Tags

CCSS.RL.4.4

CCSS.RL.4.5

CCSS.RL.5.4

CCSS.RL.5.5

CCSS.RL.6.4

Brianna needs a better transition at the beginning of sentence 2.  Which transition should replace First?

• Therefore

• Instead

• For example

• Yet

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E