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There are many ways to lead and every leader has their own style.

• There are many ways / to lead / and every leader has their own style.

• There are many ways to lead // and every leader has their own style.

• There are many ways to lead / and every leader has their own / style.

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Psychopathology, also called abnormal psychology, is the study of mental disorders and unusual or maladaptive behaviours.

• Psychopathology // also called abnormal psychology // is the study of mental disorders / and unusual / or maladaptive / behaviours.

• Psychopathology / also called abnormal psychology / is the study of mental disorders / and unusual / or maladaptive / behaviours.

• Psychopathology // also called abnormal psychology // is the study of mental disorders and unusual or maladaptive behaviours.

• Psychopathology // also called abnormal psychology // is the study of mental disorders // and unusual or maladaptive behaviours

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Studies funded by the soft drink industry are more likely to mask links to obesity and type two diabetes, according to a new report.

• Studies // funded by the soft drink industry // are more likely to mask links to obesity and type two diabetes // according to a new report.

• Studies funded by the soft drink industry are more likely to mask links to obesity and type two diabetes / according to a new report.

• Studies funded by the soft drink industry / are more likely to mask links to obesity and type two diabetes // according to a new report.

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Our ‘normal science’ of writing on race, at odds with both history and demographic reality, needs reworking.

• Our ‘normal science’ of writing on race // at odds with both history and demographic reality // needs reworking.

• Our ‘normal science’ of writing on race /at odds with both history and demographic reality / needs reworking.

• Our ‘normal science’ of writing // on race / at odds with both history and demographic reality/ needs reworking.

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In the 1860s, physicist John Tyndall recognized Earth's natural greenhouse effect and suggested that slight changes in the atmospheric composition could bring about climatic variations.

• In the 1860s // physicist John Tyndall // recognized Earth's // natural greenhouse effect // and // suggested that slight changes // in the atmospheric composition // could bring about climatic variations.

• In the 1860s // physicist John Tyndall / recognized Earth's natural greenhouse effect / and suggested that slight changes in the atmospheric composition / could bring about climatic variations.

• In the 1860s / physicist John Tyndall recognized Earth's natural greenhouse effect and suggested that slight changes in the atmospheric composition // could bring about climatic variations.