Revising and Editing Set 1 Ms.Tagle

1. What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change thought to thinks

• Change him to himself

• Change is to are

• Delete the period after enough

Tags

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

2. What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Change finded to found

• Change would be to had been

• Change his to their

• Change favorite to more favorite

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

3. What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change Suddenly to Sudden

• Change had to have

• Change bright to brightly

• Change ideas to idea

Tags

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.6

4. What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change nervous to nervis

• Change riding to rode

• Change and to but

• Change seemed to seems

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

5. What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change past to passed

• Delete the comma after cliffs

• Change cactus to Cactus

• Change trees to tree

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

6. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Change Pepper's to Peppers

• change feet to foot

• Change came to come

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

7. Julie needs a more clearly stated central idea. which sentence BEST replaces sentence 4 to improve the central idea of her paper?

• It is a place where anything can happen as long as the kids are excited about their ideas.

• It is a place where young people can sell things to other people who attend the fair.

• It is a place where parents can enjoy watching their children learn about business.

• It is a place where young people who run their own businesses can make money by selling their products or services.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.2

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.3.2

CCSS.RL.4.2

8. Julie forgot to add the following detail to the second paragraph (sentences 6-10)

The first fair was made up of a few tables in the Sandefers' yard.

Where should this sentence be added?

• After sentence 6

• After sentence 8

• After sentence 9

• After sentence 10

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

9. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• Today the Acton Children's Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, so it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton Children's Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton Children's Business Fair is much larger than the first, but it still has the same goal.

• Today the Acton children's Business Fair is much larger than the first fair, or it still has the same goal.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

10. Which transition BEST replaces Most importantly at the beginning of sentence 15?

• Instead

• In addition

• In other words

• Finally

Tags

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5