RW4 Essay Format REVIEW

To start, student misbehavior at school could be caused by the will to seek attention.

What part of essay is this?

• Thesis Statement

• Hook

• First Reason

• Details of First Reason

• Introduction

In a word, the will to seek attention, the lack of confidence, and a bad classroom environment are the main causes of a student’s misbehavior at school.

What part of essay is this?

• Hook

• Thesis Statement

• Third Reason

• Summary

• Clincher

What do we write first in the introduction of the essay?

The first part of the introduction is (a)   .

In the introduction, we need to write the three reasons in the (a)   .

Secondly, the lack of confidence is also one of the causes for students to misbehave in school. The fear of failure occurs when students have low self-esteem and do not believe he can meet other’s expectations. This fear pressures students to misbehave as a way to avoid participating in anything that may lead to failure.

The sentences in 'red' are the _____________________.

• Second Reason

• Details of the Second Reason

• Hook

• Thesis Statement

Nowadays, a lot of students misbehave at school and the most common reasons are the will to seek attention, the lack of confidence , and a bad classroom environment.

What part of essay is this?

• Hook

• Thesis Statement

• Summary

• Clincher

• First Reason

Nowadays, a lot of students misbehave at school because of three reasons.

• This is a good thesis statement.

• This is not a good thesis statement.

First of all, student misbehavior at school could be caused by the will to seek attention. Being the center of attention is a common desire for students. Students misbehave in order to look for the attention they desire to obtain. Secondly, the lack of confidence is also one of the causes for students to misbehave in school. Lastly, a bad classroom environment may also cause students to misbehave in school. A bad seating arrangements, badly managed temperatures or continuous noises are all very distracting to a student ,and it will hinder the learning process.

• This essay can get the full mark of 4 in Organization of content.

• This essay might get 2 out of 4 in Organization of content.

The thesis statement must present the (a)   .

In the Summary, we need to mention the (a)   again.