FAULTY COORDINATION

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• I slowly climbed to the lookout point and reaching the top provided me with a spectacular view.

• I slowly climbed to the lookout point, which provided me with a spectacular view after reaching the top.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• The car is dented and it has room for six.

• The car is dented. It has room for six.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• We watched a special on naturalist John James Audubon and the organization dedicated to birds is named after him.

• We watched a special on naturalist John James Audubon. The organization dedicated to birds is named after him.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• The diesel truck had a full load and it slowed down going up the grade.

• Since the diesel truck had a full load, it slowed down going up the grade.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• We turned on the television and the commercial promptly showed up and I turned the channel looking for something better and commercials were on wherever I turned.

• The commercial promptly showed up when we turned on the television. I turned the channel looking for something better since commercials were on wherever I turned.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• Evan has a new wool pullover and he plans to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

• Evan has a new wool pullover. He plans to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• Tammy walked on her sprained ankle and the ankle started to swell again.

• Tammy walked on her sprained ankle, which caused it to swell again.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• Rocky Bleir received a serious injury in Vietnam and he came back to play football for the Pittsburgh Steelers.

• Because Rocky Bleir received a serious injury in Vietnam, he came back to play football for the Pittsburgh Steelers.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• Some terminally ill people wish to be frozen, and this is the science of cryogenics.

• The science of cryogenics, some terminally ill people wish to be frozen.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1A

Identify the sentence with faulty coordination.

• The crowds to see the movie were enormous and we even ordered tickets prior to going, and unfortunately, we still sat near the screen and came away with kinks in our necks.

• We ordered tickets prior to going since the crowds to see the movie were enormous. Unfortunately, sitting near the screen, we came away with kinks in our necks.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1