GRAMMAR editing

Which sentence is correct?

• My head hurts cried Julia

• "my head hurts," cried julia.

• "My head hurts," cried Julia.

• "My head hurts! cried julia!

Which sentence is correct?

• Wow I love you screamed Juan

• Wow, I love you! screamd Juan

• "Wow, i love you!" scream juan!

• "Wow, I love you!" screamed Juan.

Which of these sentences has the correct verb tense and subject agreement?

• Reading, writing, and arithmetic is my favorite thing to do.

• Reading, writing, and arithmetic are my favorite things to do.

• Charles had ate the last apple right in front of me.

• Charles had eaten the last apple before his mother, sister, and little brother arrives home.

Which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?

• In the middle of night. The van pulled up.
• Chuck would not, give Jane the seat.
• Over coffee and toast, Kelly told me about her new job.
• Lemonade. My favorite drink.

The following sentence pair should be combined to make a better sentence. Which is the best revision? 
The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike. 

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.
• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.
• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.
• The tire on the bicycle is flat.

What kind of mistake is there in this sentence?

Yesterday he goes to the supermarket.

• Spelling

• Tense

• Punctuation

• Wrong Preposition

"When Adele walked through the store, each shiny pair of high heels called out to her."
What is being personified?

• High Heels
• The store

"The wind whistled a happy tune as I walked along the hard mountain trail."
What human characteristic is being given?

• Whistling
• Hiking