Narrative Writing: Revising and Editing

Revise this: The forest was very beautiful.

• The forest was enchanting.

• The forest made me very happy.

• Redwoods stretched from the dense, green foliage into the blue sky.

• The forest was big and majestic. There were trees everywhere.

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CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

Revise this: She thought the roller coaster was intense.

• The wind swept her air and her eyes began to tear as she hurdled towards the loop.

• The Incredicoaster is an intense roller coaster.

• The roller coaster was scary!

• The loop on the Incredicoaster scared her.

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CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

Revise this: He gave his orders to the men.

• He shouted his orders at the men.

• "Mortars! Incoming! Get down! Get to cover!"

• The lieutenant gave his orders to the people around him.

• The lieutenant told his men to get down and to get to cover.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C

Revise this: He was so angry.

• I had never seen him so angry.

• He had an furious and dangerous look on his face as he raged around the room.

• He shouted, cursed and hit the table.

• His brow furrowed and his veins popped. He slammed his fist onto the table.

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Edit this: "I want pizza," she says.

• "I want pizza," she claims.

• "I want pizza," she shouts.

• "I want pizza," she said.

• "I want pizza," she explains.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

Edit this: "The storm is approaching" he whispered.

• "The storm is approaching." he whispers,

• "The storm is approaching," he whispered.

• "The storm is approaching," he whispers.

• The storm is approaching, he whispers,

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

Edit this: She turns the wheel hard.

• She is turning the wheel hard.

• She turned the wheel hard.

• She will turn the wheel hard.

• She turn the wheel hard.

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

Which typeface should you write characters' thoughts in?

• Normal Typeface

• Bold

• Underline

• Italics

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CCSS.L.5.2D

Which punctuation mark goes around dialogue?

• ,Commas,

• "Quotation Marks"

• 'Apostrophes'

• ;Semi-Colons;

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

What punctuation mark goes at the end of most dialogue before the quotation mark?

• "Colons:"

• "Semi-Colons;"

• "Commas,"

• "Dashes-"

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A