Editing Sentences

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence. In the end the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb not eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb not eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb but not eat her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb and didn't eating her.

• In the end, the wolf ended up taking care of the lamb and didn't eat her.

Tags

CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence:

then in the middle of the story he was feeling a little bit about eating the lamb.

• Then, in the middle of the story he was feeling a little bit about eating the lamb.

• then in the middle of the story he was feeling a little bad about eating the lamb.

• In the middle of the story, he was feeling a little bad about eating the lamb.

• Then, in the middle of the story he was feeling a little bit about eating the lamb.

Tags

CCSS.L.7.1C

CCSS.L.7.3A

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence:

but the at the end he did not want to eat the lamb,and was sad that he forced the lamb out and then thought the lamb might freezes to death

• but the at the end he did not want to eat the lamb,and was sad that he forced the lamb out and then thought the lamb might freezes to death

• In the end, he did not want to eat the lamb. The Wolf was sad that he forced the lamb out, because he thought the lamb might freeze to death.

• But the at the end he did not want to eat the lamb,and was sad that he forced the lamb out and then thought the lamb might freeze to death

• but the at the end he did not want to eat the lamb,and was sad that he forced the lamb out and then thought the lamb might freezes to death.

Tags

CCSS.L.7.3A

CCSS.W.7.4

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence:

The wolf and lamb are both very changeable.

• The wolfs and lambs are very changeable.

• Both the wolf and the lamb change throughout the end,

• The wolf and the lamb change throughout the story.

• The wolf and lamb are very changeable.

What should you do before you turn in your work?

• Ask the teacher for help.

• Make the first letter of every word a capital letter.

• Edit and make corrections.

• Use a pen.

This sentence needs to be fixed. Choose the correct sentence:

He was going to eat her then he got upset threw her out then he was worried then he was nice.

• He was going to eat her, but he got upset and threw her out. Then he was worried about the lamb and chose to be nice.

• He was going to eat her. Then he got upset threw her out. then he was worried then he was nice.

• He was going to eat her then he got upset threw her out because he was worried then he was nice.

• Because he was going to eat her. then he got upset. Threw her out then he was worried. Then he was nice.

What is the best way to make sure you spell characters names correctly?

• Ask someone near you.

• Use a dictionary.

• Look in the text.

• Sound it out.

Read the ________________ you wrote and make sure they are a complete thought.

Write a complete sentence about leeches. It does not have to be true, but it does have to be written correctly.

Tell me 3 things. (3 sentences)

1) Which is better, chunky or creamy peanut butter?

2) Why is that one better?

3) Why should I believe you?