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Reading books is a much better activity than playing video games because my mind gets a better workout.

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For example, last night I was reading The Golden Skull by Rebecca Smythe, and when Watson jumps overboard to avoid the whirlpool, I could smell the salty sea air and feel the icy slap of the ocean.

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To really enjoy a story, I have to do some work to create the characters and setting.

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In contrast, when I play video games, no matter how much fun I have, I never find myself imagining new characters or places.

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Yet, this “work” feels more like play because I find it energizing to let my imagination create new worlds.

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Since the game developers do the work of creating new landscapes and experiences, my brain feels lazy as I consume something without creating anything.

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Adding my experiences and thoughts is part of the magic that makes reading a more pleasurable experience.

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Of course, my grey matter needs to chill out and blasts space aliens every once in a while, but if given a choice between a sticky controller or a feathery page, I will choose a book every time.

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