Revise/Edit Assessment Review (2nd 9 weeks)

What is the correct way to write the sentences below?

(1) Every day at school. (2) Students work very hard on reading books and writing essays.

• Every day at school, students work very hard. On reading books and writing essays.

• Every day at school, students work very hard on reading books. And writing essays.

• Every day at school, students work very hard on reading books, and writing essays.

• Every day at school, students work very hard on reading books and writing essays.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 3?

(1) Susan went to Target one evening with her sister. (2) She bought many new decorations for Halloween! (3) She gets a black cat statue and a pumpkin picture frame. (4) She also picked out a huge pumpkin to carve.

• Insert a comma after and

• Change gets to got

• Change statue to stachue

• Change the period to a question mark

What is the best way to write the sentence below?

Karlie plays soccer every weekend, yet she still has not scored a goal.

• Karlie plays soccer every weekend, so she still has not scored a goal.

• Karlie plays soccer every weekend yet she still has not scored a goal.

• Karlie plays soccer every weekend. Still has not scored a goal.

• The sentence is written correctly.

What is the BEST way to combine the sentences below?

(1) Last weekend, David baked many desserts with his mom. (2) Some of the desserts he baked were a confetti cake and chocolate chip brownies.

• David baked, last weekend, many desserts with his mom, and the desserts were confetti cake and chocolate chip brownies.

• Last weekend, David baked confetti cake and chocolate chip cookies with his mom they made a lot of desserts.

• Last weekend, David baked confetti cake and chocolate chip brownies with his mom.

• Last weekend, with his mom, David baked confetti cake and chocolate chip brownies with his mom.

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

When I was in Austin, I seed the state capital building.

• Change seed to saw

• Change Austin to austin

• Delete the comma after Austin

• Make no change

What is the BEST way to rewrite the ideas in the sentence below?

Molly and Elise went shopping for a dress for the daddy daughter dance and they also went shopping for shoes for the daddy daughter dance.

• Molly and Elise went shopping for a dress for the daddy daughter dance, and they also went shopping for shoes for the daddy daughter dance.

• Molly and Elise went shopping for a dress for the daddy daughter dance they also went shopping for shoes for the daddy daughter dance.

• Molly and Elise went shopping for a dress and shoes for the daddy daughter dance.

• Molly and Elise went shopping for a dress for the daddy daughter dance, but they also went shopping for shoes for the daddy daughter dance.

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

At the end of the school day, I hanged my lanyard up on the hook.

• Change school to School

• Change hook to huk

• Change hanged to hung

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

Thomas hit the ball really good at his baseball game, but he was still out at first base.

• Delete the comma after game

• Change good to well

• Change baseball to Baseball

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

My favorite time of year is Summer because that is when my birthday is!

• Change Summer to summer

• Insert a comma after Summer

• Change is to was

• Make no change

Which of the following is an irregular past tense verb?

• walked

• spoke

• help

• watch