Punctuation Rules

Ever since I turned 15 last fall I have lost the habit of making my bed except on Fridays of course when I change the sheets.

• Ever since I turned 15 last fall, I have lost the habit of making my bed-except on Fridays, of course, when I change the sheets.

• Ever since I turned 15 last fall, I have lost the habit of making my bed, except on Fridays of course, when I change the sheets.

• Ever since I turned 15 last fall I have lost the habit of making my bed--except on Fridays of course when I change the sheets.

although some people may think that I am a slob I have some strong reasons for breaking the bed-making habit

• Although some people may think, that I am a slob, I have some strong reasons for breaking the bed-making habit

• Although, some people may think that I am a slob I have some strong reasons for breaking the bed-making habit.

• Although some people may think that I am a slob, I have some strong reasons for breaking the bed-making habit.

in the first place i am not worried about keeping a tidy bedroom, because no one except me ever gets in there.

• In the first place, I am not worried about keeping a tidy bedroom because no one except me ever gets in there.

• In the first place I am not worried about keeping a tidy bedroom, because no one except me ever gets in there.

• In the first place, i am not worried about keeping a tidy bedroom, because no one except me ever gets in there

if my mum ever decides to inspect the room I guess I can hurry in there to fluff up the pillow, and slap on a spread

• If my mum ever decides to inspect the room I guess I can hurry in there to fluff up the pillow and slap on a spread.

• If my mum ever decides to inspect the room, I guess I can hurry in there to fluff up the pillow and slap on a spread.

• If my mum ever decides to inspect the room I guess I can hurry in there to fluff up the pillow and, slap on a spread.

Otherwise I am not bothered. in addition I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets.

• Otherwise, I am not bothered. In addition I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets.

• Otherwise, I am not bothered. In addition, I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets.

• Otherwise I am not bothered. In addition, I find nothing uncomfortable about crawling into a rumpled mass of sheets and blankets.

On the contrary I enjoy making a cozy space for myself before falling asleep. Also I think that a tightly made bed is very uncomfortable entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed.

• On the contrary I enjoy making a cozy space for myself before falling asleep. Also I think that a tightly made bed is very uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed.

• On the contrary I enjoy making a cozy space for myself before falling asleep. Also, I think that a tightly made bed is very uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed.

• On the contrary, I enjoy making a cozy space for myself before falling asleep. Also, I think that a tightly made bed is very uncomfortable: entering one makes me feel like a loaf of bread being wrapped and sealed.

Finally and most importantly I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I prefer spending those precious minutes checking my messages or feeding the cat than tucking in corners, as well as, snapping the spread.

• Finally, and most importantly, I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I prefer spending those precious minutes checking my messages or feeding the cat than tucking in corners as well as snapping the spread.

• Finally, and most importantly, I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I prefer spending those precious minutes checking my messages or feeding the cat than tucking in corners, as well as, snapping the spread.

• Finally and most importantly I think bed-making is an awful way to waste time in the morning. I prefer spending those precious minutes checking my messages or feeding the cat than tucking in corners as well as snapping the spread.

Is using the comma here right or wrong?

Jane was running late, we went to the venue without her.

• Right

• Wrong

Is the comma usage right or wrong?

I caught a cold, because I had some ice cream.

• Right

• Wrong