English 11B Grammar Review

Michael loves To Kill a Mockingbird, it is his favorite book.

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• Michael loves To Kill a Mockingbird and, it is is his favorite book.
• Michael loves To Kill a Mockingbird; it is his favorite book. 
• Michael loves To Kill a Mockingbird, and, it is his favorite book.

After Ms. Siemieniak went to Target, and she visited her family. 

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• After Ms. Siemieniak went to target she visited her family.
• After Ms. Siemieniak visited Target; and she visited her family.
• After Ms. Siemieniak went to Target, she visited her family. 

Katie was immediately reminded of the English Spanish and chemistry homework she had at home.

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• Kate was immediately reminded of the English, Spanish, and chemistry homework she had at home. 
• Katie was immediately reminded of the English; Spanish; and chemistry homework she had at home. 
• Katie was immediately reminded of the English and Spanish, and chemistry homework she had at home.

New York City is a crazy hectic place. 

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• New York City is a crazy, and hectic place.
• New York City is a crazy, hectic place.
• New York City is a crazy--hectic place. 

Will you please--Brad stop tapping your pencil--turn your book to page six?

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• Will you please? Brad stop tapping your pencil, turn your book to page six.
• Will you please (Brad stop tapping your pencil) turn your book to page six?
• Will you please; Brad stop tapping your pencil; turn your book to page six?

Sallys paintings were worth a lot of money. 

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• Sallys' paintings were worth a lot of money.
• Sally's paintings were worth a lot of money. 
• Sally's paintings we're worth a lot of money. 

You will discuss the following themes in To Kill a Mockingbird: courage, maturity, and racism. 

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• You will discuss the following themes in To Kill a Mockingbird, courage, maturity, and racism. 
• You will discuss the following themes in To Kill a Mockingbird courage, maturity, and racism.
• You will discuss the following themes in To Kill a Mockingbird; courage, maturity, and racism. 

The last day of school. June 7. Is already on students' minds. 

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• The last day of school (June 7) is already on student's minds. 
• The last day of school, June 7. Is already on students' minds. 
• The last day of school (June 7) is already on students' minds. 

Paige was always asked, "What do you plan on majoring in?"

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• Paige was always asked: "What do you plan on majoring in?"
• Paige was always asked. "What do you plan on majoring in?"
• Paige was always asked, "What do you plan on majoring in"?

Tiger Woods was an incredible golfer, however, he made many personal mistakes.

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• Tiger Woods was an incredible golfer. However, he made many personal mistakes.
• Tiger Woods was an incredible golfer; however, he made many personal mistakes. 
• Tiger Woods was an incredible golfer; however; he made many personal mistakes.