Aspire for Greatness: English 2

It was Moms birthday, and my sister Chloe and I wanted to do something special.

• It was Mom’s birthday, so my sister Chloe and I wanted to do something special.
• It was Mom’s birthday, but my sister Chloe and I wanted to do something special.
• It was Moms birthday, but my sister Chloe and I wanted to do something special.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

We decided to bake homemade cookie's for her.

• We decide to bake homemade cookies for her.
• We decided to bake homemade cookies' for her.
• We decided to bake homemade cookies for her.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

First we took turns, measuring, and pouring the ingredients into a large mixing bowl.

• First, we took turns measuring and pouring the ingredients into a large mixing bowl.
• First we took, turns, measuring, and pouring the ingredients into a large mixing bowl.
• First we take turns measuring and pouring.  The ingredients into a large mixing bowl.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

When it was time to add the sugar, I grabbed a canister that was full of something white.

• When it was time to add the sugar, I grabbing a canister that was full of something white.
• When it were time to add the sugar, I grabbed a canister that was full of something white.
• When it was time to, add the sugar, I grabbed a canister, that was full of something white.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.L.3.1A

It wasn’t labeled, so I was sure it was sugar.

• It wasnt' labeled, so I was sure it was sugar.
• It wasn’t labeled. But I was sure it was sugar.
• It wasn’t labeled, but I was sure it was sugar.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.2.3D

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

In just a few minutes, the bowl was full of what looked like mouthwatering cookie dough. 

• In just a few minutes, the bowl were full of what looked like mouthwatering cookie dough. 
• In just a few minute's, the bowl was full of what looked like mouthwatering cookie dough. 
• In just a few minutes, the bowl was full of what have been looking like mouthwatering cookie dough. 
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

We didn’t taste it because we wanted to have plenty of cookies for Mom.

• We didn’t taste it because we wanted to have plenty of cookies for mom.
• We didn’t taste it because we wanted to have plenty of cookies' for Mom.
• We didn’t taste it because we wanted to have plenty of cookie's for Mom.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

 We shaped the dough into little balls arranged them on a pan and slid the pan into the oven.

•  we shaped the Dough into little balls arranged them on a pan and slid the pan into the oven.
•  We shaped the dough into little balls, arranged them on a pan, and slid the pan into the oven.
•  We had shaped the dough into little balls, and arranged them on a pan and, slid the pan into the oven.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

As the cookie's baked a wonderful smell filled the air.

• As the cookie's baked a wonderful smell filled the air.
• As the cookies' baked, a wonderful smell filled the air.
• As the cookies baked, a wonderful smell filled the air.
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.2.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

When the cookies were ready we took them to are mom. 

• When the cookies were ready we took them to are Mom. 
• When the cookies were ready, we took them to our mom. 
• When the cookie's were ready, we took them to our mom. 
• NO CHANGE

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CCSS.RF.2.3D

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A