STAAR Writing Review - Editing

(20) By the end of the first day, the lighthouse was more than 10 feet away from it’s original location.
How should sentence 20 be changed? 

• Change was to is
• Change it’s to its
• Change original to origanal
• Sentence 20 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.RL.7.10

CCSS.RI.7.10

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RI.8.10

CCSS.RL.6.10

(30) The current living arrangements is causing me a lot of stress.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 30? 

• Change arrangements to arangements
• Change is causing to are causing
• Change a lot to alot
• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1F

(20) I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin along with a couple of example sentences, the rest of the report would be a breeze.

What is the correct way to write sentence 20? 

• I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin along with a couple of example sentences. Sure that the rest of the report would be a breeze.
• I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin. Which along with a couple of example sentences meant that the rest of the report would be a breeze.
• I jotted down some notes about the word’s origin along with a couple of example sentences. The rest of the report would be a breeze.
• The sentence is written correctly in the paper.

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CCSS.L.6.1E

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.W.6.2C

CCSS.W.6.4

(9) It connects your brain to your spinal cord. (10) Which connects to most of the nerves in your body.

What is the correct way to write sentences 9 and 10? 

• It connects your brain to your spinal cord, this connects to most of the nerves in your body. 
• Connecting your brain to your spinal cord and then to most of the nerves in your body.
• Connecting your brain to your spinal cord. It connects to most of the nerves in your body.
• It connects your brain to your spinal cord, which connects to most of the nerves in your body. 

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CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

(18) José Peruyero is a Florida dog trainer, he explains that while a human can walk into a kitchen and know that a stew is cooking on the stove, a dog can be trained to distinguish a stew that has carrots in it from one that doesn’t.

What is the correct way to write sentence 18? 

• José Peruyero, a Florida dog trainer, explains that while a human can walk into a kitchen and know that a stew is cooking on the stove. A dog can be trained to distinguish a stew that has carrots in it from one that doesn’t.
• José Peruyero is a Florida dog trainer who explains that while a human can walk into a kitchen and know that a stew is cooking on the stove, a dog can be trained. To distinguish a stew that has carrots in it from one that doesn’t.
• José Peruyero is a Florida dog trainer. Who explains that while a human can walk into a kitchen and know that a stew is cooking on the stove, a dog can be trained to distinguish a stew that has carrots in it from one that doesn’t.
• José Peruyero, a Florida dog trainer, explains that while a human can walk into a kitchen and know that a stew is cooking on the stove, a dog can be trained to distinguish a stew that has carrots in it from one that doesn’t.

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CCSS.L.7.1C

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

(15) Mr. Owens, my Band Director, insists that I practice every night.

How does sentence 15 need to be changed? 

• Change Band Director to band director
• Delete the second comma
• Change insists to insisting 
• Sentence 15 does not need to be changed.

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CCSS.RL.8.3

CCSS.RL.2.6

(9) “This, ladies and gentlemen,” Mr. Potter announced as he held up a hat, “Contains all the words on your vocabulary list.”

What change needs to be made in sentence 9? 

• Change ladies to lady’s
• Change announced to announsed
• Delete the comma after hat 
• Change Contains to contains 

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CCSS.L.2.2C

(10) Instead of telling my Mom, I asked the teacher to move me to the front of the room.

What change needs to be made in sentence 10? 

• Change Mom to mom 
• Change the comma to a period 
• Change asked to ask
• No change needs to be made. 

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CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

(12) I would also have a place to spread out materials and work on projects without getting in anyone elses way.

What change needs to be made in sentence 12? 

• Change I to And 
• Change spread to spred 
• Change anyone to no one 
• Change elses to else’s 

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CCSS.L.3.2D

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.1.1B

(18) Sleepy but determinned, I crawled out of bed, got dressed, and headed to the store for the weekly shopping venture.

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 18? 

• Change Sleepy to i was sleepy
• Change determinned to determined 
• Insert a comma after store 
• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C