SJW Revising and Editing

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4? "Only you can prevent wildfires."

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Insert quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence

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What change should be made in the sentence: "However, there's more to Smokey then a pair of blue jeans, a shovel, and a ranger hat."?

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Change then to than

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9? (7) It began in the mountains of New Mexico. (8) One windy day, a ranger was looking for signs of wildfires. (9) All of a sudden, he spoted smoke rising from the forest below his watchtower. (10) He called for backup.

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Change spoted to spotted

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What is the correct way to write sentence 14? Options: Crews battled the blaze in thick smoke.  And blistering heat., Crews the blaze battled blaze in thick smoke and blistering heat., Crews battled the blaze in thick smoke and blistering heat., Crews battled the blaze and they did it in thick smoke and blistering heat.

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Crews battled the blaze in thick smoke and blistering heat.

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What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 18? (18) Before long, the bear cub was surronded by fire.

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Change surronded to surrounded

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What change needs to be made in sentence 25? ("The tree they had climbed was charred completely black.")

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Change they to he

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How should sentence 27 be changed? (27) After the fire, soldiers found the bare cub in the tree.

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Change bare to bear

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What change, if any, should be made to sentence 32? Options: Change cubs to cub's, Change heard to herd, Change through to threw, No Change needed

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Change cubs to cub's

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What change, if any, should be made to sentence 34? Options: Change desided to decided, Change story to stories, change fire safety to Fire Safety, No change needed

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Change desided to decided

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What change, if any, should be made to sentence 38? (36) The ranger wrote a letter to the Chief of the Fire Service. (37) They agreed to name the bear cub "Smokey" after the fire safety character. (38) Smokey's story brought the Character to life. Options: Change Character to character, Change Smokey's to Smokeys', Change life to lifes., No change needed.

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Change Character to character