Essay Writing Feedback

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Thesis statement ideas?

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1-2

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A topic sentence should include:

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a supporting argument for my thesis statement

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Which sentence should not be used as a topic sentence?

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all of the above

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"We want education for every child's bright future" is an example of:

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Both. The one you discuss depends on the meaning created.

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Technique used: "millions of children are out of schools"

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Answer 1 and 3; analysis depends on audience effect.

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Issue with: 'Malala wants you to see that education is good.'

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Uses 'you', too informal.

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Paraphrase: "we can not succeed when half of us are held back".

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Society can not progress if girls are not being educated.